Her school uniform
is out on the floor,
She gets dressed and closes her bedroom door.
Scared of what will come
when she reaches the school gates,
Getting ready to be bullied which she really hates.
She'll be ok for now,
Her first lesson is not with them,
She cant bare to be laughed at, no not again.
Walking down the corridors,
People stop and stare
To see a girl who's crying and in pain she cannot bare.
Teachers ask her whats wrong,
She replies with I'm Ok.
And sadly walks away.
This Has to stop she screams
As she bangs her fist on the wall,
I cannot be dealing with this no not at all.
Here they come laughing,
Shes scared stiff now..
Go away She tells them, They call her a stupid cow.
Break time is over,
Back to lessons she goes
She sits at her desk silent and froze.
One more lesson to go,
Its only 2 'o clock...
They come over to her and give her a shock.
She walks on home,
Sad and lonely, Wishing she was someone else
If only , If only.
Once shes in her room,
With her parents not there
She cries in anger, sadness and dispair.
Shes to afraid to cut,
Instead she just sheads a tear,
Trying not to be scared and overcome her fear.
Laying silently asleep
With a wet pillow under her head..
Shes thinking of tomorrow's events which she will dread.
Author notes
Just like to say that the person in the poem is me. Its some of the events from a normal school day.
Thanks for reading.
Tash (Broken - gurl)
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Next in book
Excellent hoeny -
Sounds like the story of my life while I was in high school. Honestly darling just ignore those stupid idiots. I know I had to or otherwise I would have been a goner. You've done well with this poem.You've got two poems in the contest so the points will be divided. You've made a 50 on this poem. Great job. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you. Kahy
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I'm sorry you're experiencing that in school.
I do like your rhyme a lot.
Thank you for entering and good luck. -
This is soo, amazing, I love it, Best of luck
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I'm so deeply sorry you have to deal with this dear. I hate the thought of bullies and I believe that every person should have a chance to stand up and be counted.
Thank you for sharing in my contest.
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I'm sorry you deal with this. If I could do anything about it I'd take care of it for you in a heartbeat. I don't even know where you live though....Which seems wierd bc I know nothing about you but your name and your poetry..and I still love ya!
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It's a really good poem, but I'm not sure it quite fits with the prompt.
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this is really good
really sad...
but i like poetry thats real
and thats what this is
good write
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aww that was really great i'm glad u r too sceard to cut cause i do and it is very addictive if u want to talk to someone about anything i am ur girl so tell me i will listen and not make fun of u !
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this was written really well
i liked it alot
it was great
i'm sorry people can be such assholes
all you can do is deal with it
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this was sad i feel your pain this poem almost made me cry because i know how it feels to be picked on i am a slow learner and people make fun of me because of that your heart shall be better if you need a friend i am here
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fantastic write
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you know the more I read this the agrier I became because of how cruel people can be and just because you are quiet and withdrawl they treat you like your a leppar! This write just down right breaks my heart because I have been there and know exactly what this is like. Boy do I know! my heart goes out to you and if you ever need someone to talk to then please send me a note
take care
Lena -
oh, girl, I am sorry.
It sounds real rough in your corner of the world.
I promise there are people out there who will look into your eyes and see the truth.
If I could give you a hug I would.
Hang in there.
And don't cut, it's now worth it.
If you ever need someone to talk to, feel free to drop me a message.
<3 deep one -
its amazing
i love the rythm and rhyme....
maybe if you stuck each section into four lines it would stand out a little more.. either way..it was really good.. -
oh dear
poor child, dont hide the pain and despair
You have to let it out, to someone anyone. Becuase that one time you absolutely cant take it anymore will be the time you might do something you'll greatly regeret. -
wow. that is very sad but its an amazing poem.
i luv all of ur poems
but u need 2 do sumthin bout bullying.
like talk 2 a teacher or sumthin
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i feelt that way to trust me
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it was cool/sweet
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how awful, I know exactly how this feels, having been bullied in school, oh, so many years ago, as for the poem 'bear' not 'bare' and a few other mistakes such a capitalization in the wrong place but really so clear, such strong feelings. I just want you to know, it does get better.
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i no how you feel. i go through the same
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oh my this is amazing god i feel like this everyday at school those a holes need to die hehe
great job lot of emotion
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You cannot let people do this to you. Eventually you have got to talk to someone. This has got to end, and you know this. I loved this poem. It really is sad, and I wish you the best.
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I think it's a good write. But you can't let people bully you, it's just not right. If avoiding doesn't help you sould try talking to a teacher, principal, school counceler, or parent/guardian for advice or help. Hope everything gets better soon
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I really, really, really like this poem.
It is so deep and your vocabulary is outstanding. Keep writing!
I hope this isn't happening to you...
Two thumbs up! Beautifully written!
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bullying is horrible. I'm so sorry you have to go through this. I also find it pretty dumb that teachers don't notice what's going on--- how oblvious are they. It's not right to feel like this! You're so much better than that!
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Wow, bulling is truly a terrible thing. Well written and it has a nice flow, very emotional too. You wrote out this girls feelings really well, you are very talented. :-D
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I'm in the same boat
Huni,this is wonderful ,you know im in the same boat as you,this is a brilliant write!I feel all the emotions that where put into this poem.
Huni im here for you like your here for me just send me a message on msn or on here and i always will reply.
Take care
xxxx
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Hmmm, I understand... this is very vivid, But I am sorry if our conversation reminded you more of school and prompted this poem. I apologise if that's the case... Beautiful, sad and, If you want to talk IM me, and i will reply asap. This has helped me understand your situation more now, thank you. Well written, keep penning poet. x
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