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Goodbye, Love

You were standing underneath
a large old oak tree
when she fell in love
with your eyes.

You were driving to
the corner store
when she fell in love
with your smile.

You were talking to
another more beautiful woman
when she fell in love
with your personality.

You were walking away
towards someone new
when she lost the
whole of her heart to you

When she was left alone
she noticed that
even if she did love you
like she thought she loved you

It really wouldn't have mattered
love doesn't exist
it only leads to being heart
broken and alone

Leave me alone let me cry at the loss of you.  I'll miss you forever, I'll love you for as long as I'm living...Goodbye.

Author notes

Ummmm, boredom once again brings out random things... guess this shows i'm still kinda alive right?? ^_^

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  • Ahkam silver member
    January 7, 2009

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    Oh!

    you have shown a very sensitive side of your personality. the eyes, and the smile and ,,love ,,heart and then a broken one.this is very sad but very nicely composed thought, thanks for sharing.


  • el dia
    January 3, 2009
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    So sensitive words !