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miss you like crazy.

miss you like crazy,
baby,
you're everything to me.
all that i want,
more than i need.
i never deserved you,
you're just too good for me,
but i'll be here waiting,
watching just to see,
if those beautiful eyes ever decide,
to maybe, look at me?
like you did before,
standing at the door,
holding roses, asking for my hand,
what happened? i don't understand.
you looked at me with desire,
felt the fire in your touch,
now you never even look my way,
it's got me losing my mind more and more each day,
i miss you like crazy, baby,
what more do i have to say?

Author notes

inspired by a dream i had.
thinking about it kind of makes me sad. (lol)
````~~~~~~midnight vampiress (aka. Rebecca)

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  • gigglesalot
    January 6

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    a dream? jeez....i go through this every day with my husband =[ you just put it all into words for me is all. thanks so much for entering.


  • XxshatteredXheartxX
    January 3
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    wow great write
    what went wrong
    between you two
    but anyways it was
    a good poem


    • Xx.Toxic.xX
      January 4
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      thanks

      you're very kind. and quite a bit went wrong in that relationship, i should never have been in it in the first place. but..... that's another story, eh?