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Directions

Lost in a desert of open clouds,
refusing to believe in the desolation.
Fluff, lost in deep blue shrouds,
directions given with deep frustrations.

Floating now into open skies,
filtering toward the ground.
Vanished forever in the lies,
thoughts that are so profound.

Gut wrenching pain of past expectation
Removing nothing of wanderlust
Fill the soul with vibration
Following the gust.

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  • queenie
    January 16

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    this is a great write for the picture. i like that the titles says so much but the contents of the poem goes in a deeper aspect of directions. this is filled with introspect. my best to you in the contest.


  • Samplette gold member
    January 12

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    Love how you looked past the sign, but connecting them subtly. Very well expressed. Thank you for entering.
    Sam