I flee in mind when you kiss my lips, asking me to do the same
The reason why and by mistake I call you with another name
A tiny smile then appears covering your face with despair
Then you act sexy when you are not, trying to impress me as if I care
That’s why I fuck you in darkness, cause you filled me with disgust
After muing I try not to vomit, feel like tossing my cock is a must
You say you love me knowing it's a lie; pretending you're about to cry
You say you care yet,yet you threw the dice; which made my hate your winning prize:
I hate your ornaments and all you wear; your fake boobs that are shown bare
I hate your moves and how you act; I hate our agreement and our pact
I hate your smell, I hate your view; and everything you buy me new
But most of all I don't hate you; I hate myself for being with you...
Fuck You
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Awesome poem
Wow ya captured a twisted and sinister feel really well I love that it was just rawly bitter, and picked the person apart without holding back Made it really powerful
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DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
moving pic, screaming ass write.
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Hmmm...
Why does this sound like me?
(Somewhere along the line - dare I admit through so many years - I ran out of fingers to count the relationships that fit this description so succinctly...)
You stole my thoughts and my outrages. Fuck you for stealing.
GREAT poem, thank you for saying what I can never say. You made us feel it!
Debbie
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Very well written and expressed. But I must know, if you hate this woman so much, why are you with her? It is like you are defiling yourself being with someone who you cannot stand. It is one of the worst forms on self hatred. This piece is sad really, quite painful to read, well written but, hard on the soul I think.
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Brilliancy in it's darkest form. This was insane.
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freakinbrilliant
Then you act sexy when you are not, trying to impress me as if I care
That’s why I fuck you in darkness, cause you filled me with disgust
After muing I try not to vomit, feel like tossing my cock is a must
i read those lines lines like 5 times, and i hate odd numbers so that means i must of enjoyed it: )
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thank you...
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You're brutal. This poem is pure genius, and I love it.
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i am in love with your poem its beautiful. I have had relationships like that often you expressed it so well.
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Hi Godless but divine,
The rawness of the emotion (hate?) is graphic and unambiguous. I witnessed this with a friend of mine who broke up with his girlfriend and I can still hear and see him say about her "I hate her" with all the emotion he could muster in his voice and facial expression. That level of hatred I suppose is in all of us albeit it still surprises (shocks) me when I witness it. I feel fear when I encounter that depth of hatred and only hope I will never experience that kind of emotion from another about me. I do appreciate your willingness to reveal the depth of your emotion and your honesty - I know I scare myself and so I choose to be more private. Thank you,
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fuck you too and thank you
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hmmm
You would not believe the pictures that's flashed before my eyes as I read. Lovers, lies, sex, another, traid, lust, and pure hate. All wrapped into a crazy story, that is good writing. I do pray what flashes is just my mind and not realty, for your sake. Well done.simple, fuck you. -
hmmm
well at least your honest good job with the write intersting
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short, powerful and full of imagery pack with emotion. I really loved this.. thank you very much for sharing..
Angel
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Truthful and violent almost in what it is expressing. Well done. This is visceral and seems to be very cathartic. Extroverted piece of writing. Thanks. Anthony.
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powerful words
wow i don't know what to say except i havn't read anythingn this honest in a while.... so that is refreshing. I agree with you this is very interesting... i've seen a side of you i didn't think you had and interestingly I can realate to some parts of this write. Emotionally charged.
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I think you have a lot of learn about love, life, and human understanding. You soul is dark and disturbed. I only hope your heart and soul will someday find a better equilibrium.place.
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Powerful...
I wonder if this is how people thought of me when I broke up wth them (I do not own a fake pair) it's fierce and says something that most leave unspoken. I love it and i know this is a favorite among all your writes.
Alexis
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I so love this write! I esp love the way you ended it! Awesome write!
peace and love
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A very vivid rant, I hope it is fiction for your sake.
Well Done
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Spectacualr & Vivid
This is real, raw...some very vivid strong emotions within each line. I can see a man without one worry speaking his mind....A very pretty woman with implants standing there with her mouth open in surprise...when you say " Fuck You" This a really one loveless rant/poetic justice that shows your talent explosive & boundless.....You are a dynamic and masterful write.........Novy
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2awiehhh
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Excellent
A very fine write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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