I don't like the sunny days,
nor rainbows nor birds nor trees,
'cause they'll desert me one by one,
when my soul begins to freeze.
I don't adore the "silent" charm,
that spring will bring along.
It'll be equally cold then too,
without a rhyme, without a song.
How I hate the pretty flowers,
their pink and purple hues,
the blades of grass, refreshing green,
the sky with all its blues.
The flowing waters I so despise,
they remind me of your love,
The clouds smile, yet full of tears,
I look to the heavens above.
"What does my being seek",
I ask, groping my soul.
The heart just then begins to bleed,
no way I can control.
I don't complain, I don't accuse,
I take it as it comes,
ignoring all the plaintive notes,
that I find me hum.
Author notes
Arnica
My first dark write of the year.
Loved writing it.
My birthday present to me...
A contest entry
- Love Poems/Heart Break/Wanting Love/Lost Love by gigglesalot.
900 points, ended January 12, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give ME EMOTION by Violent Glass.
700 points, ended January 29, 101 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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AwEsOmE
good work poet.this is a great poem. -
this is incredible
i loved it
great job
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"I think I'm afraid to be happy, because everytime I get too happy, something bad happens." -Charlie Brown
..That's what this poem reminded me of. I really love this write, I can relate to it so much sometimes.
" "What does my being seek",
I ask, groping my soul.
The heart just then begins to bleed,
no way I can control."
... Favorite lines. Beautifully written.
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i really liked this piece. great flow and concept of love. thanks so much for entering.
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Wow
I loved this! You did wonderful! Good luck in the contest! I bet you'll win.
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"I don't like the sunny days,
nor rainbows nor birds nor trees,
'cause they'll desert me one by one,"
My favorite part. I can feel the pain through this poem, I love it. I can completely relate to the pain and frustration sunny beautiful days can cause when inside you feel like a raging thunderstorm.
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