Inside my heart is a love so pure that it hurts with every heartbeat.
within your eyes is a love so true that it brings me to my knees,
deep inside my soul, is a truth thats tells we will be forever more in love,
encased in your dreams ,are images of our life as we grow old.
An emotion so strong, it melts the heart and snuffs out all around it,
a feeling so unique that it drowns out all it sees.
an urgency that screams for a touch from it's angel,
a beauty so hidden it yearns to just be seen.
An emerald glow of shining stars stare at your reflection
as a hazel sheen of all within, gazes at my soul
All we are, all that was, hidden in a word
all we see, all we know, left behind so many torn
all we feel, all thats true, is a love everlasting
and everlasting love, between me and you
A contest entry
- This is a contest of love, if you do not have it do not enter by Topaze.
1750 points, ended January 4, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - all the prewrites you want (theres a catch) by serenity silvermoon.
400 points, ended January 7, 299 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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sounds like true love to me...I love the way you put this in words..excellent write
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Interesting!
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A love everlasting shall surpass time itself, hidden within each other's heart.
best of luck to you with this..
Riftkin
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Thank you for such a fine entry spoken from the heart for all to see. This is what I am looking for, excellent. My best wishes always.
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