I walked with steps of nowhere
not knowing where to turn
I saw a sign before me.
was this my chance to learn ?
Answers lay along my path
my questions deep inside
will I find true destiny
or will it be denied ?
I looked around for guidance
no guidance did I see
my fate to be decided
the judgement down to me.
I made my choice, began to walk
my mind still unaware.
The way I chose the right one ?
I’ll tell you when I’m there.
Author notes
Picture Prompt.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration XIII by Samplette.
700 points, ended January 17, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congratulations on the well deserved silver
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very well done. i love the flow as well as the contents. it moves along so smoothly and it rhymes very beautifully. my best to you in the contest.
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Great take on the prompt! I really enjoyed the rhyme and direction you took this in! Best wishes to you in the contest! A lovely piece!
Frogz~
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Just amazing! Perfect for this picture. Your thoughts flow so smoothly with your rhyme! I love this also.
Besat wishes in the contest.
Gaylene
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I loved the rhyme flow and the fun in this one. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
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I truely did love this! It flowed from one word to the next. Bravo! Good luck on the contest!
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Amazing! This write is deep and thought provoking, it reaches readers on a personal level, and it gives me hope that we'll make our way in life somehow. Best of luck to you in the contest!
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Wonderful! From beginning to end, it sang. Great words, rhyme, and flow. Thank you so much for entering the contest.
Sam
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