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~Believe~

 

 

 

 

That night you found me weeping with

despair I wanted to die,You knew where

I have been, and the roads I had taken

until I was completely broken no longer

alive.

 

 

 

 

with my sins wrapped around me letting

me know I have nothing to offer trying to

stay in control, I cried out to you, “Lord

which way do I go? I am tired of living

my life please take my soul.

 

 

 

 

 

I had heard stories of you all my life, and

never finding you real until that night and In

my most deepest of heartbreak you reached

out for me a nothing,a nobody gave me life

and a reason to believe.

 

 

 

 

 

Rend The Veil

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  • John Faulkner
    November 19
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    congrats, hon, on the silver.Your love for God comes through beautifully..This is such a soft write.I can feel your emotions come through..very moving piece..loving message

    John


  • LifeEndsNow
    April 3
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    great!!


  • islekine gold member
    March 10
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    Wonderful write!

    Congrats on the Silver!
    Write on!


  • Stevie.me
    March 10

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    Rend this is wonderful

    Oh goodness Rend this poem is gorgeous .
    I felt so much from it and reminded me of how awesome God's love for us is. None of us deserve it .
    Personally I have great difficulty understanding His Love for me.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 10
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      Stevie I finally got a face to your sweet

      comments and a blessing too!

      Blessings

      Rend


  • penman gold member
    February 8
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well done. Congratulation on the silver.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      February 16
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      sorry I didnt come earlier

      and Thank you for coming by and commenting

      Blessing my friend

      Rend


  • Three Doves
    January 28

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    Well written truth in testimony of our Lord. We are never alone. Congratulations on the award.
    In God's Love
    Noah


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 28
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      God and His love has me

      and I am blessed more for it, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting,

      Blessings

      Rend


  • Xianaria
    January 24
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    Thank you ~
    Deeply moving words, quite personal.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 28
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      Thank you so much

      for giving me a Silver it was such an honor for me to receive.
      many blessings to you and yours

      Rend


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 7
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    I have certainly been here... reaching for faith once more. Wonderful write Sis!

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 8
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      Hey Sis

      Nothing and no one can stop us from loving our God! and always trying to reach for Him , cause with out it i am empty! your right my sis !!!

      love ya Much

      Rend


  • Nom de Plume
    January 4
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    another beautiful write... and sure weve all had moments were are faith is tested...


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 8
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      Thank you for stoping

      by and commenting, they are always welcomed

      many blessings

      Rend


  • doolie gold member
    January 3
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    A beautiful and heartfelt write. Good luck in the contest

    Laura


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 8
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      Hello sweet Laura

      Thank you My new friend, for comming by and commneting

      Many Blessings

      Rend


  • Maxboy gold member
    January 3

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    A wonderful and inspiring write, well done.

    Beautiful.....Best wishes in the contest


  • Nevel
    January 3

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    I guess you can put some a comma in your last stanza behind the words "nothing" and "nobody". What a change to distinct between what you have heard and own experience. Lovely write
    Good luck in the contest
    Erwin


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 8
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      Thank you Erwin

      for such a friend that you are a blessings a true man of God!

      Blessings


      Rend


  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 3
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    Daughter,,,you always have a way of opening up that heart, and penning just how it is...unabashedly throwing yourself on God's mercy like a child....you touch our hearts with that God you know is there....A wonderful entry...and wishes for your success in the contest...Mom

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 8
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      Yes Mom

      I am amazed How God can grab me and meet me where I am and pull me from the pit of hell in my mind, and woo me back to His loving arms no judgements, just take me as i am and love me!
      as you do too, and I am not saying that i wont have struggles because i know i will, but God knows i am far from judging anyone and does he show me favor......? more than i deserve.

      with Love to you

      Rend

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