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Did He See Me Die?

Pathetic glances slide my way
Yet I have to live another day
My heart is skipping a dead ballet
He couldn't stay, he couldn't stay.

Blinded by my falling tears
They became his warm-wet fears
My emotional curse interferes
He disappears, he disappears.

Granted was his love for me
His heart will now not hear my plea
His emptiness I failed to see
He is now free, he is now free.


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PureAmethyst

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  • Unknowing...
    January 21
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    im not sure this shows what i waz looking for sorry


  • Anu-Nataraj
    January 3

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    beatiful !!!

    amazingly wrritten
    good luck in the contest!!!

    much love,

    Anagh