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Alone in this world

Ooh
just pretend that I'm not here,
and I,
will pretend that I don't care,
that you,
have your masks on,
and I,
forgot where I left mine

down,
it was a minor social faux pas
that landed
you in my heart
with nothing but your words
and I feel
alone in this world

Oh,
we missed the half ten bus,
it went,
left without us,
now,
stuck in rain and cold,
with nothing,
but each other to hold,

Ooh,
it was a minor social faux pas
that landed,
you in my heart
with nothing but your words
I was once,
alone in the world

Oh,
Sometimes I get scared,

And I know,
Sometimes you're afraid,

But don't,
tell me I couldn't be worse,

And I will,
try to put you first,

ooh,
it was a minor social faux pas
that left you,
left you in my heart,
with nothing, but your words,
and I was,
I  was once alone

Author notes

These are lyrics to a song I'm working on, it's just about a relationship really. Starting out, getting used to each other, how you get closer but something always shakes things up a bit, realising that your actions can have such an effect on someone, and eventually how you couldn't bear to go back t how you were before.

 

As I'm still working on it, any sort of reviews and critiques are welcome. 

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