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wait for some one speacil

Day after day,
Night after night,
I wait and crying for my soul,
The long nights,
That's cry out for me,

Life see me as a path road,
To where I don't know,
Im waitin for the the right guy,
Im sitting with memories that makes my heart ahce,
Search for a fight,


When I see these couple,
I wish I had some one to love,
Who will love me forever,
Who treat me well,
Understand to know what I need,

One day he'll come by,
Unexecpted,
When I really need it ......


Some day he'll be found

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