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overflowing emotion

aching hearts
wounds unfolding
stuck in this sick art
i'm no longer holding

no longer can i fight
I get lost in dreams
at the dead of night
as i hear my scream

I've worn a mask
to hide myself away
but now the flask
is oh so gray

I'm lost in the maze
deep inside my head
while my eyes have a weird glaze
a tear i want to shed

life is a disappointment
one after another
every single moment
i wonder if its the same for some others

life passes by
as i sit idle
i can't seem to deny
my thoughts have become suicidal

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  • sexxxy-vixxxen
    January 4

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    WOW, Very good writing.....powerful words......I have to say that this poem is one that I can relate to 100%.....and it was sort of refreshing to read the words that you wrote, as it felt as if the words came out of my mouth.......!!! Keep writing and let your emotions flow out onto that piece of paper!!

  • love-n-life
    January 3

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    Love it

    Hey, I just became a member and wanted to know if you wanted to be friends? I liked your poem. Look me up under love-n-life if you want to be friends.