My heart still aches from this direful pain
That continues to dwell within my chest
The pain has come to stay
Haunting me every night and
Every day a little more of me
Slowly starts to fade away
The darkness consumes my mind
Each and every other day
My innocense slowly disappears and starts to fade away
While the pain continues to dwell within my chest
The pain has decided to stay
My nightmares are not only a dream but
It's now my reality
Which I suffer from
My smile starts to die
My heart starts to break
The tears being to fall
My soul beings to rot
Deep down inside
I'm dead
Author notes
Written January 3,2009 Saturday at 4:47a.m
tell me what you think :]
1/1/2009 Thursday 3:26a.m [The poem you see below is what I written before] =[
Fuck the world
Fuck everything it has to offer
I am tired of everything
Even if it's a new year
I'm still suffering from
A broken heart
For the pain grow much more stronger but
I do know I am still try to be positive and strong and
If that doesn't go well you know what FUCK IT because there's always
Next year and next time and
One more thing
I'm dead deep down inside
My soul is slowly dying and
My heart beat is stopping little by little
As time passes
I slowly watch myself die...
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aww.
I love you maria. feel better
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No sissy I love you I don't want you to die
you are my world and I look up to you
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we all have our times of needing to write and feel this way but you did a bang up job releasin what it was that you were feeling but any ways this was just really wlel penned and I like the version you posted sis and the originaldraft wans't bad but glad ya went with the 2nd
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please don't feel this way. I am sure that every thing will get better with in time. Just don't give up on the world so soon.
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Aw I've been there, and it sucks. But I've learned that life is beautiful in the darkest hour, and it was meant to be beautiful it's upto you to make it that way. Hope you feel better. I'm here if you need someone to talk too or just listen. ♥
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ThatWasAnAmazing poem. Even though you feel as though you are wing inside you may not be. It only takes one thing to bring you back to life. I dont know what it is for you but you will fine it.
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its an amazingly written poem....u put your emotions across very well =] im so sorry you feeling like that though. hope you feel better soon huni =] x
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