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Girl.



When that plane landed,
I knew.
I knew this Christmas was going
to be different.

The first kiss,
was surely a surprise.
And the ones after,
were absolutely amazing.

Girl.
You are truly amazing.

The way you teased,
poked, prodded
and drove me crazy,
really got me goin.

Your laughter
left a sweet taste in
my throat,
I loved it.

The way your hair
curled so bold
and so beautiful,
made me smile

How soft your skin
was against my
corse hand
was spectacular

Girl.
You are spectacular.

The way we were so
raw,
and physical
when we were in bed.

I could have sworn
our bodies
couldn’t create
more heat

Candle light
lit your face
on the last
night.

Singing softly
to your sleeping
ears,
I felt my heart stir.

Girl.
I didn’t want you to leave.

I didn’t want the laughter
the hugs, the kisses,
the love
to leave.

You told me
to not attain feelings
we both know
it would hurt in the end.

I didn’t know
how to react
so I just let
the lovin' take ahold.

Girl.
I miss you.

I miss your hair,
your skin,
your smell
your giggles.

I know you
miss my hands,
my voice
my jokes.

I’m not sad,
nor am I depressed
I’m actually happy
you made me happy.

You are my Wendy,
and I am your Pan
I know we’ll
fly again some day soon.

Girl.
Thank you for flying with me.




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I miss my Army Girl.

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  • Temptation.
    February 19
    Edit | Reply
    aw this is good. and its sad. thanks for entering.


  • Stormy Days
    January 14

    Edit | Reply

    AWWW

    This is a beautifully written peace so wonderful i love the way you refered to Peter Pan I love the movie
    ~GOOD LUCK~
    *Dark Poet*

  • AWWWWW I LOVE IT!!!

    Candle part was m favorite, unforgettable. You are so unforgettable ^.^ Miss you PAN!
    Love you, still.