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beautiful lips

that gentle shade of rose
perfect lines to form that smile
standing on my tip toes
to make that moment worth while
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oh, how i strongly wished
my arms could of been around you
as you leaned down for that kiss
that brought in the year new
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because in the warmth of those lips
the first moments of the year came to a slow
my god, those beautiful lips...
meant more to me than you will ever know
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uhm... yeh...

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  • Undying Resolution
    January 4
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    Aww... so sweet


  • StillWalkingAlone
    January 4
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    i love your description of this XD

    awwwwwe this is cute ^___^

  • della vancastle
    January 3

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    lips!

    lips? whose lips?

    It's really sweet, and soft, and just really adorable. I know the feeling of staring at someone's lips and thinking 'wow, you've got great lips', because there really are good and bad lips. Unfortunately I've never brought in the New Year the fun way...there's always a disgruntled sister who doesn't have a boyfriend in the room, and that makes it totally awkward. It's a nice thought, though.