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I Would Love To Meet you

I love beautiful women with hot wheels.
I love long walks for good meals.
I love Sex in the rain.
I love competition with nothing to gain.
I love To drive without a place to find.
I would love to be the first thought on your mind...

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 6

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    ooo...I like the last line of this piece...really wraps up the enitre poem nicely...well penned