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This is how life goes

This is how life goes,
this is where little kids say no.

This is when the wind whistles through the trees;
And where the frogs jump in the rain.

This is where the birds soar gracefully through the clouds;
When the lighting strikes in the night sky.

When the leaves blow through the grass;
When the snow comes flowing down.

This is how life goes.

A contest entry

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    January 3
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    nicely done, difficult to read with the background, but well-worth the highlighting.