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Another Dream(to Aby)

I've lost you, and it hurts.
Why did you leave, why did you go.
I loved you, now I miss you.
I need you, and now I wished you.
Your not dead, you just left.
I would of done anything, I mean you were everything.
I was full of love, now I just feel empty.
Why did you leave, why couldn't we be.
You left my soul to bleed, and now I just cant breath.
How can you be so mean, why can't you be more like me.
I guess this was just another Dream...





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