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Alternative Universes.

           

A million words linger
on the lips of a million poets
struggling to find the essence of 11 letters.

Fornication.

Shall we talk of love, emotion, desire, need,  lust.

In a quiet corner of a dark forest two tiny beetles meet in single purpose.
No flowery words, no need of description, no need of poetic devices.
In a quiet corner of the forest two tiny beetles fornicate
and crawl away contented.

Oh to be a beetle.


         

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Prompt - Fornication.

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  • Angelflower
    January 5

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    Wow, this was really good. Who would have ever thought to write about a fornicating beetle lol. you really did a wonderful job! thank you very much for sharing! best of luck in the contest!

    Angel


  • Unsigned gold member
    January 3

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    Fronicatio...what a difficult prompt because you never know where o draw the line...


    Ths was very well done..


    Simon


  • smonte19124 gold member
    January 3

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    Beautiful! Is the only word that comes to mind. This is definitely a winner and I wish you much luck in the contest. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • thejollytinker
    January 3

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    I'm judging, you're gold. You capture the finite and enormity of the word by defining it. I meant something else, but that's all the powder I got! Loved it.

  • Aww very clever this is and very true! Burt the 'flowery words' can be nice too
    Best wishes with this creative slant on the prompt.
    Gaylene

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