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Behind Her Veil

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Behind her veil is a life of extravagance
Parties and masquerades at every chance
Men would crumble at first glance
And everyday it seemed her life would enhance

She floats along in majesty
Her beauty so perfect you just have to see
A single look and men shout with glee
A wonderful life she leads, so luxurious and free

She has riches beyond most
She's the first one to toast
She lives along the coast
And she's the most gracious host

Behind her veil
Her life continues to sail
At everything she tries she will never fail
And she's the one true desire of every male

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prompt: "jealousy"

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  • Symphony
    February 19

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    Very well written!

    I love the words you used, like 'floats' and 'majesty' - you made her sound so serene and calm and composed!

    I really enjoyed reading this, perhaps mostly because she seemed very 'lifelike!'

    Great job! thanks for entering


  • Thendestinystruck
    January 5
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    beautiful...thats all that describes it!


  • eizen-wolf
    January 3

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    tell em her home address i will camp on front of her house hehe nicely done .
    go for it


  • Denerica
    January 3

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    Excellent writing with this! Only thing vail is spelled veil, maybe a typo even. You impress me of how young you are. Love ya dear one...blessings.


  • MizaLePiza
    January 3

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    Hehehe!

    Finally one with humor, and it makes me jealous!! You did wonderful! Good luck in the contest! Thanks for entering!


  • Silent Wayfarer
    January 3

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    HAHAHAH! Good stuff! This was great! Hope u do great in this contest ! Again, awesomeness! lol

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