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Oral Fornication




That I bury my head between your thighs
and taste the quivering wet undulations of desire
as your body soaks in all of me is not enough.

I want more than all of you in every sense
and to possess you in a way of passion
well beyond our minds comprehension.

There is no ocean as deep as your body
and there is no sunset without a final flash,
like an orgasmic symphony directed
with all of the skill of my tongue.












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  • his kiss
    July 11
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    Wow

    Hot,hot,hot!
    xoxo,
    Azura

  • Bruce silver member
    March 25
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    This is really really good, my favorite I think of all your pieces. Well deserving of the gold.


  • no longer a member
    February 27

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    no sunset without a final flash - uh huh ...
    Truly one to remember. I can see why you won this contest.
    Wow. That woke me up. Excellent - hot and oh sooooo sexy. -Bramble

  • Aisades
    February 16

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    I enjoyed the concept that I think this poem was reaching for. When you hit a level of love for someone where not even passion and sex can quench that requirement for them, a lot of folks run for the hills. I know I have.. it's powerful feeling your soul succumb to that kind of yearning. It makes us into slaves sometimes at the mercy of another human being that may or may not be at the same level of love that we are at.


  • Nom de Plume
    January 16

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    Congrats on the gold, and love the way you totally immerse yourself in your work
    cheers

  • momentum
    January 7

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    "like an orgasmic symphony directed
    with all of the skill of my tongue."

    what a wonderful metaphor, such a beautiful composition...
    very well done sunshine...congrats on the gold


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    January 6

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    Wow, what you describe is beautiful and something I haven't experienced. Congratulations on your gold trophy and thank you for sharing your poem with me.


  • Angelflower
    January 5

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    wow, this was soft and erotic! well done! you did a wonderful job! I truly loved this! thank you very much for sharing! best of luck in the contest!

    Angel


  • Unsigned gold member
    January 3
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    ow ow ow ow !!!!!!!!


    Simon


  • thejollytinker
    January 3
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    You tryin' to hurt someone... *clap*


  • MonAmourEternel
    January 3
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    Very erotic and very unique write....

    love
    MAE


  • In Too Deep1
    January 3

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    A hot and beautifully penned take on the prompt. I loved the metaphor and imagery combined to create this sensual art. A most enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 3
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    "an orgasmic symphony directed"

    seriously, that's hot. need to get me some of that...stat!


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    January 3

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    Well Done

    This is a hot piece, The imagery is perfect the way you put your words

    together is masterful! well done ! can i call you Grand Master Poet!

     

    Blessings

     

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