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You

The more we talk, the less I can feel
My intuition's fading -you're like alcohol
I anticipate every moment we don't talk -you're like nicotine
When I close my eyes, all I can feel is you next to me

There's a thousand things running through my mind
Something I've been meaning to ask, though it's hard to believe
I type it out every time we talk, then delete it
I open my mouth to say it, only to not speak it

Love's got nothing to do with it, those days are over so you said
As you lean on me with a sad smile and a nod, then you're off again
Things are clearing up once more and you're taking my hand
So lead me to a new place where we can get lost in the friendship of it all

The more we talk, the less I can feel
My intuition's fading -you're like alcohol
I anticipate every moment we don't talk -you're like nicotine
When I close my eyes, all I can feel is you next to me

Shy smiles, giggles over nothing, it's like old times all over again
Shattered memories forgotten, ashes are all cleaned up, I swear
Things are falling back on track, they're only going up now
And I've never felt happier, glad I've given up regrets while you got past it

Don't wait around for life to come your way, take it by the collar and go
Make yourself happy, make that your first priority -do it for me
Or at least let the madness go, put that smile back on your face, and take my hand
I'll lead you to a new place where we can get lost in the friendship of it all

The more we talk, the less I can feel
My intuition's fading -you're like alcohol
I anticipate every moment we don't talk -you're like nicotine
When I close my eyes, all I can feel is you next to me

There's a thousand things running through my mind
Something I've been meaning to ask, though it's hard to believe
I type it out every time we talk, then delete it
I open my mouth to say it, only to not speak it

Eyes closed shut, I'm trying to remember [it's just you].

Author notes

Don't ask where it came from or what it's for, it's just thoughts floating around my head that came out. Music can do that to you, don't take it to heart.

It sounded better in my head, I promise!

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  • Sir Squigglim
    January 3

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    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I wonder who's /this/ for.

    Ha, I can play the same game. lol. JK

    No, seriously, beautifully done.

    • NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU. THIS IS MY THING!!!! YOU CAN'T PLAY THAT CAME!!!! -destroys-


      no, srsly, thanks. hehehe