i see my goddess
in the sky
above looking down
her whispers
upon the wind
crystal snow
kisses of remembrance
everlasting passion
looking upon the forests
seeing her avatar in every animal
knowing her love
with every glint of beauty
in the stars
feeling her love with every full moon
and whispering her name
when i see the world she gave
my mother Earth
Terra Gaea Nature
)O(
Author notes
_ hystaria
i am wiccan
A contest entry
- Mm'kay. It's Free-verse Time :] by Sunkissed xo.
400 points, ended February 19, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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How divine
Very romantic and vivid.
This was a delight to read.. simply enchanting.
Thanks for entering my contest. Best of luck. -
Beautiful. You ensnared my senses into really feeling your devotion and love for the Mother and all her children. I love how you encompass all mediums - the sky and the ground. Blessed be, my friend
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i used to be wiccan...muslim now but I really enjoyed this write.
fav:
everlasting passion
looking upon the forests
seeing her avatar in every animal
knowing her love
with every glint of beauty
in the stars
great job!
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interesting read...thank you for entering and good luck
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wow this is really cool. I am glad that you entered my contest. Great write!
♥ meg -
I like the links with the natural world you have used in this poem (sky snow stars moon forests).
Through these images I know how you see your Goddess. I too imagine God as a woman. I don't know why... she just comes to me that way.
Good luck with the comp.
Kind regards, Peter
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Interesting poem. Good sense of flow and imagery. I can feel your sense of wonder and appreciation in this write. very gentle and not preachy, kind of what I was looking for in this contest. Well done!
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