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When The Dam Breaks

Like the proverbial dam
That broke and
Couldn't hold
Anything in anymore
My mental bridge
Went to pieces
And my feelings
Didn't know what to do
So they scattered
And spread themselves everywhere
Leaving me lost
And not knowing
What to cry over first



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  • TheStupidLamb
    January 4, 2009
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    tell me what's up? i know i'm busy, but i'll get back to you in a couple days, lol.


  • Survivingbychance
    January 3, 2009

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    I hate to seem insensitive, but I do believe you have the wrong 'damn.' The one you are looking for is "dam". Sorry.... OCD....

    Anyway, hang in there.


  • A n u k e t
    January 2, 2009
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    awww babe...im right here to hold you when you cry..

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