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Feel the Sensations

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The start of tingles
tickling your nerves
As a warmth fill you
And washes over everything
Casting a lively hue
Over the world
And all seems right
Until slowly
Everything seeps
Back to how it was
Fin

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SENSATION

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  • Tqop
    August 10
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    Wow! This takes my breath away.


  • HereComesTheSun
    January 2
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    in short words a wonderful poem
    the pace was magnificent