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i, your hero

 

In sadness and darkness, your sorrow and shame,

don't walk around empty like you are to blame.

This life tends to rob us of all given joy,

but I refuse to let it be taken from you.

 

I love you like no other

and will fight all your fights.

I only want to see you happy

and make things right.

 

I know your eyes tremble

upon hearing things you can't stand.

And I'm here to protect you,

like any good hero can.

 

Don't weep and be bitter

and shut of the world.

Let me see your bright smile glow.

Your beautifully made and I love you so.

 

I'll suck out life's poison

with true love's kiss.

And I refuse to stop loving you

until time ceases and we don't exist.

 

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I love you Brittany!!

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  • Akarian silver member
    January 16

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    Interesting, quite good, even though I don't like rhyme too much. I can tell your are very heartfelt about this person, and poured it into this poem. Good job!


  • XxemohatexX
    January 4

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    ...wow

    i like this because i knwo how you are feeling but the diffrence is ... its a one way street adn idk have to convinve the guy to to give up adn im done trying let him live his life how he wishes push everyone away he did even me good poem your vry talanted


  • Desire gold member
    January 4

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    Beautiful~

    Now this is one Empowering piece penned
    Love the feel of energy also the images-
    I imagine Brittany with a smile
    knowing she can always count on You~
    Bravo!!
    Another Excellent verse written~
    and tight rhyme too
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    January 3

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    Awww how romantic, t is wonderful you found someone. i need a hero to suck out life's poison for me. Thank you for sharing your poetry.


  • Cant force beloved
    January 2
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    another beauty.

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