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tears

it is
raining out nd tears keep pouring out
needing someone to reach out to me
and wash away these tears
that are falling down my face
but these clouds keep rushing in and im just thinking of you
and hoping that you are bringing me angels

to the deepest of my soul i really need you in my life
but these clouds
keep rushing in and im thinking of you
and hoping that you are
bringing me angels
from the heavens to earth

because it is raining out
and tears keep pourin out
im needing someone to reach out ot ome
and wash away these tears
that are falling down my face


lets take it back to that very day
in loving memory was a word i longed not to hear
but i heard it that day of your rosary
and tears
came rushing down

till this day
i still wonder why your gone
so thats why these tears are running down my face

for why do these tears
curse me as if they have a mind of thier own
just thinking about you makes me go into a state of sadness
so sad due to the fact that your not here anymore

for you have passed to another dimensional place
that is more peaceful than here
then why do these tears last longer than they should
when thinking about you

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  • teardrop gold member
    January 2

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    Feeling I know all to well. I am sorry for your loss. Great release. It's always hard to lose a loved one.

    Wishing you a gentle healing.

    TD