Butterflies on the breeze
Wind blowing through the trees
The taste of cotton candy on lips
Raindrops clinging to hips
A love so fresh and new
Something amazing but taboo
Breath hot on my skin
A shiver, a sly grin
Eyes filled with fire
Body burns with desire
A soft warm caress
A true love I confess
Irresistible temptation
Overwhelming sensation
Holding her close to me
Sitting there and just be
Author notes
hope you like the poem
A contest entry
- Symphony Of Sensuality by Deceits Tears.
1000 points, ended January 3, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your Romantic poetry. by trekkergirl.
550 points, ended April 15, 55 entries
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Comments
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This is very nice. usually I do not care for rhyming because it comes across as forced however, this one did not come across in that manner. One thing though. I did ask only for left align poems in this contest. However since I can read this okay I'll forgive that one error. I tell you this only to make you realize that you didn't follow all the rules in this contest. Some judges would DQ you for that. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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I liked this write, your rhyme flowed well
Thankyou for your entry and all the best
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