Finally alone, he thinks to himself
admiring the greatness of the sky
ablaze with starlight, some twinkling
shimmering crystal moonlight dancing
coming through the middle of the river
the air so full of cold with ice entwined
gentle winds welcoming in comfort.
He watches the stars pondering aloud
how many secrets they must hold-
what else could they tell mankind-
maybe of the dreams sent to Heaven
or the destiny of messages sent
could an angel may be posed upon one;
maybe they are just there to guide us
they are forever the beauty of the sky!
I wonder if he's ever wished upon a star
like so many other people do
has his wishes ever been granted
his dreams ever came true.....
the moon now captured his eyes again
reminding him how lonely one can be
still he smiled to himself, so smug
thinking how happy his one will be!
Please tell me what you think
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I loved it so much and even felt the chilly air, imagining standing in it and looking up. I love the sky and all that it contains. Blessings
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An excellent piece of work. It was written with lovely imagery that I found quite relaxing. A very soothing piece that puts the reader right in the middle and seeing the beautiful sky as it moves above. I am a great star gazer and love things to do with the stars and this piece really spoke to me. I can't though, find the name of your town in there. It was one of the stipulations of the contest. You might want to look at that before the contest finishes. Thanks for entering and thanks for the wonderful read.
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Good luck in the contest.This is a really great poem.The imagry is perfect and the flow is really good.
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Very Sweet!
My sis, well done here I loved it! you wrote a great piece here, great flow and imagery, good luck in the contest,
Blessings
Rend
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