Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

The forgotten one.

These hands forget the madness
typing with no shame
forgetting words you said
notes running through subconscious
lies

wondering why you left me
here all alone
no one really gets
the fractured feelings
you perpetuated upon your
own flesh and blood.

How dare you

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • written-in-ink
    January 24
    Edit | Reply
    i like the end

    it was very powerful


    thank you


  • Piper77
    January 4

    Edit | Reply
    Aww, wow! That was pretty good. It was sad though. Sorry that I haven't been around much to comment, but you're still an amazing writer!