Cut, cut my last cut,
Burn, burn Just once more,
Cry, let the one final tear fall,
Slam, slam shut the last door.
I have had it with life,
Like it's had it with me,
It used and abused me,
Proved i will never be free.
I am destined for hurt,
Put in to this world to be used,
Used for other peoples sick pleasure,
I'm just a girl to be abused.
Slap me, and beat me,
Rape me, call me names,
Abuse me, then use me,
Dont worry cos it's me the world blames.
I was born a bad person,
Born from saten, and so wrong,
So go ahead, have your way with me,
I can no longer fight, or be strong.
So ill, cut one last time,
Then ill, burn just once more,
But i will not cry any more tears,
Because i can now end this evil war.
A contest entry
- all the prewrites you want (theres a catch) by serenity silvermoon.
400 points, ended January 7, 299 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - misery loves company... by nobodys-girl.
700 points, ended January 18, 92 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - desperatly depressing by frozenblackpetals.
550 points, ended February 4, 49 entries
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18000 points, ended April 28, 1011 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I hope this doesnt trigger anything for any one. Please leave me a comment, good, bad, what ever you feel. Just please be a little sensative as they are all true stories about my life so far x
Comments
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Ah, from your comment above, I know that you are the same person whose New Years Eve poem I just read -
And, like I said in the other one, please, I do think that the most important thing is that you don't blame YOURSELF for the actions of other people...
Big time!
Two lines sprang out at me here;
"
I have had it with life,
Like it's had it with me,"
<-- that was just so strong, and yet so defeated....
Thank you for entering
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...... u made me cry!!!!!! hmpf!!! lol. seriously, this totally broke my heart, so wonderfully written and such striking words! ohmigosh! thank you so much for entering!
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i absolutly love this, though it makes me worry about you. i hope your ok and i hope one day you'll be able to get away or fight back. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck.
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i love this one, i like your work so far!
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great write xx
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Great
Really great poem i know someone just like you i helped her to be true to herself i to start and figth it again now shes doing ok has a BF and her cuts are healing i hope your doing ok and no one deserves these things -
... *hugs* I love you and care about you so much! None of this stuff deserved to happen to you, none of it is your fault! Not at all! Talk to me if you want to...
Gwen
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Hun, you don't deserve all the things that have happened to you. I hope you find someone that can make it all better for you...
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ohhh i feel so sorry for you too. you've had shit all your life and it just isnt fair...and it hurts to know aswwell... im so sorry...hope it gets better soon xxxxxxxxxxxx
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i feel so sorry for you!!!!!!! i'm so sorry your life is like this.... it heartbreaking to see someone as nice as you be so ruined!!!! i wish you had it so much better
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