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Snow

Snowflakes hit hard ground
My heart falls along with it
Lovely little flakes

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 2

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    Nice soothing piece

    love the vision of snow flakes hitting hard ground,
    very natural poem here, thank you for this entry, good luck