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Winters Foreboding - Haiku

Wildlife Survival
In the coldness of the night
Search for sustenance

A contest entry

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  • Brazos silver member
    January 2

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    I like it! I'm very fond of haikus, and this one is very good. For some reason, it gave me an image of a gaunt coyote digging through snow in search of something to eat.

    When a haiku paints an image like that in my mind, it's good. Good luck in the contest!

    Brazos


    • smonte19124 gold member
      January 2
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      WOW! I am truly honored by your comments. I am new to this form of writing and I believe it was in a contest hosted by you that introduced me to them. Again I thank you. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 2

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    so true

    wildlife seeks shelter under anything they can find
    love the way you posted this, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Sparkles


    • smonte19124 gold member
      January 2
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      Thank you Sparkles for taking the time to comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann