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[ tail wagging ]

tail wagging
paws in the air
welcome home

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  • Knight70
    May 13

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    no critical review here....

    You taught me a ton about haiku in your workshops when I first joined AP. I'm so much more comfortable writing them than when I first joined. I love the AHA moment with 'welcome home.' What can I say? I'm a dog lover, too.

  • Bruce silver member
    January 2
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    Hey, this is super! Do you have Bichons? They are exactly like this, aren't they? Nice poem!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 2

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    don't they

    express their happiness of masters coming home ,
    i like this a lot, can see the happiness in this, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Sparkles