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New Year



New year,

new ambitions will soon push out the old
  (I pray)

dancing in the noon-time shadows,
I masquerade as a figment of your imagination

I cool you like the morning dew between your toes,
soaking into your skin, where I shall remain
until your pumice scrubs me away,
(though I cling with all my might(and that turns out to not be much))

and I drift
into this new year
seeking the renewal
I so deserve



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  • stuckonlove
    January 3, 2009
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    Exaxctly how I feel! Good job