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Spellbound

                                                      

Alas this night,
yon stars doth fall
from velvety skies
Behold thee
yonder words
does't spake
Reveal to me
thy soul for sooth
perchance to dream
my true loves name
for he who doth
call'eth me,
my love...
 
 
 
 
 
 

 
 
 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

option: picture prompt
10-50 words

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • individuality gold member
    May 17

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    ah love's name is whisperd under the stars that watch romance steal the night away, a good poem.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 26

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    Amazing!
    Olde English
    a well written poem that would clearly have been voiced
    Well done on your silver
    Julie


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    January 10

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    Love the tenderness and verbiage of this poem. Well done, write on dear poet!

    Dennis


  • Joseph Hollis
    January 5

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    Brilliant use of Old English speech. This is a beautifully written collaboration that is certainly deserving of a trophy. Well done!


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 5
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    love it love it love it

    just plane wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • EmeraldDreams
    January 3

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    You two have produced a wonderful and uplifting collab here. Great write, well deserving of the silver.

    You should work together again some time!


  • Sunshine Always
    January 3
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    Congrats both on this beautiful piece. Very well written.Well deserving of the silver...Hugs...mal


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 3
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    excellent

    love this piece! composition, story, flow..spot on!


  • PastelMoons gold member
    January 3
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    Congrats!
    This is beautiful!
    Great collab!!
    Thanks for sharing
    ~Pastel


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 3

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    SO SWEET AND SOFT!!!!!

    The quiet night filled with bright stars do indeed bring to one a feeling of love and serenity.'s


  • Sandygram
    January 3

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    This is such a lovely poem and so full of beautiful imagery. Lovely take on the prompt. A pleasure to read! Congratulations on the Silver. You take care, Sandy


  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 3

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    Congrats on the silver!

    Wow, you two dance together well! Loving the old english....such a romantic feel to it Congrats on the well earned silver!


  • smonte19124 gold member
    January 2

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    Mariana and Fritz O Skennick you two work beautifully together and should do it again for you have produced a work of art. Congratulation my friends. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • Kari gold member
    January 2

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    I love the wording in this piece. It's so beautiful and such a unique take on the prompt. I feel in love with it when I read it. Thank you so much for entering my contest and congrats on the silver trophy!


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    January 2

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    Love it...

    Thank you for allowing me to work with you on this, was fun...
    Looking good...
    Take care,
    Fritz.........
    X


    • Mariana gold member
      January 2
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      Thank you kind Sir...you are a prolific wordsmith. Twas a pleasure...x

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