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eternal

Missing image
paintings of almighty
stay eternal;
comes out at once,
colors do not weather
nor wash,
zoom like arc;
light exploding
through tiny drop.

Author notes

inspiration
Rainbow

picture credited to google

A contest entry

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 3

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    Right away I thought "this is about a rainbow!" then I looked at your notes - sure enough! Yay! I love rainbows ^.^ so beautiful. Great write, absolutely love the simplicity! Great job and good luck!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • januaryrain gold member
    January 3
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    Wow, amazing write, great imagery
    Congrats on the trophy.


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    January 3

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    Wonderfully descriptive. I enjoyed the picture you painted with this piece. It makes the picture come to life. Great write and congratulations on the trophy. Yours, Gypsy


  • lindaburns gold member
    January 3

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    With “rainbow” as a prompt, this
    poem is perfectly understandable.
    The image is vivid.
    Very good work.


  • maralisa silver member
    January 3

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    wow a wonderful take on the promt I love your creative imagery congratulations on your honor maralisa


  • Kari gold member
    January 2

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    The wording in this piece gives a very clear visual of what you're saying and that really makes it worth while to read. You did a great job here. Thanks so much for entering and congrats on your hw!

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