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Haiku




snow covered yard
three deer graze then listen
to sounds of wind.


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  • Mungcin silver member
    October 31

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    captured

    immediately conveys the image of alertness to sounds that may or may not have been a threat. I can see the deer returning to graze.

  • kool

    Kool poem =) , nice and wonderful haiku , i get what you mean about haiku's now ,
    wonderful k.
    byyyyyyyyyyye k

  • carole21
    January 5
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    nicely done . . congrats on the gold !!


  • daviscth silver member
    January 5
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    Congratulations on winning the golden cup for this amazing piece of poetry.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 2

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    oh yes

    they do with their perky ears and whistles to let others know whats going on, love the take on the picture lol, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Sparkles


    • Swan song gold member
      January 5
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      Thank you so much for the gold and for the awesome prompt
      Clongrats to al the winners.

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