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morning hot tea

with a pinch of sour note

hinting lay off

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Contemporary Haiku

Contemporary Haiku by Harrisham Minhas. 525 points, ended January 21, 25 entries
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Draig aine
January 21
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congratulations on the green thingy
really like this one
Harrisham Minhas
January 17

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Thanks for your entry:

"morning hot tea
with a pinch of sour note
hinting lay off"

Aww...this is sad.
Well-crafted.

Thanks again.

Harrisham Minhas
- Venugopal
  January 21
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  Thank you Minhas, for HM
  
  I am very glad
- Venugopal
  January 17
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  thank you Minhas,
  
  your's uncle
- - Harrisham Minhas
    January 18
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    You're welcome.
Sai Babas Lotus
January 7
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Hi! Its better now, just need the article "a" after the word "with".

Char
Sai Babas Lotus
January 7

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Hi! This is in past tense. Need to change it to present tense in order to work as a haiku.

Regards,
Charishma
Draig aine
January 3
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well fone
a great aha
maralisa
January 3
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a great haiku dad good luck inthe contestmaralisa