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Rebirth of Aquarius

Earth, wind, water, fire, spirit,
I call your names knowing you'll hear it;
join me praising the beauty of earth,
dedicating myself in its time of rebirth.

Amethyst calls forward wisdom and peace,
quartz with its power will surely release;
petals for enchantment,a candle-protection,
I am one with the All, and its perfection.


*** This is an edit of a much longer poem, for a contest. I will bring back the original as soon as the contest is over. It is supposed to be 10 to 50 words, and though it is 54, I hope that is okay. ***





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option 3- http://emandrahime.deviantart.com/art/Wicca-40976614

The photo had a lot of purple, so I looked up all the correspondences for the purple roses, the candle, the amethyst stones as well as quartz, and seeing as amethyst is the birthstone of Aquarius (of which I am one ), I decided to make this into a dedication ceremony for an Aquarius. Hope you like it!

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  • Kari gold member
    January 2

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    My favorite part of this piece was when you said we are one with all. That really is perfection. Thank you for abiding by the rules and reediting it. I really appreciate it. Congrats on your hw!


  • toomysterious
    January 2

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    This is truly a beautiful interpretation of the picture, I think. I don't know that much, but you seem to have researched it well. Good luck in your contest.