Your perfect fantasy
Never mine
Your beautiful world
Never mine
You entrance all
You consume hearts
You enthrall minds
I watch
I long
I want
I need
Never mine
You caress the stars
You dance with the wind
You sing with the sea
I am shut out from all
That is beautiful
And good
Everything that is yours
Will never
Be mine
Author notes
For the picture I was concentrating on the eyes in the background.
Not sure what I think of this one...it didn't seem to come out how I wanted it to...
A contest entry
- Picture Contest (fantasy) by Faded Existence.
1000 points, ended January 25, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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That was pretty!
I really like the picture too!
Good Luck! -
Pretty picture
Pretty Poem
I like it
*KT*
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Simply Beautiful!
it's simple, but beautiful
It did seem to be lacking something...
But only one thing.
Who knows...
But It is brilliant a beautiful!
( )
Annie
♥
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Oh wow. It is a bit simple, but it's beautiful. I love how you focused on the eyes. You wrote the story from that perspective.. and not the girl. I'm impressed! I really did like this! It's so sad. But an amazing write! Thank you so much for your entry! Good luck
-Faded
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