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Waking Dreams

My fantastical nature clashes
With the currents of time
But I hold on tightly
To your imagination

I climb out of your story
Escaping into reality
The pages fly by
As if caught in a wind

Powered with your wanting
Kept with your needs
I'm only destroyed in
Your lack of creation

Before fading into fiction
I bring this joy to you
You bring me to life
With your waking dreams

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  • guardianhost gold member
    January 16
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    Bravo!

    Excellent, crisp, fresh flow,
    Congratulations on winning the Bronze Trophy!
    Well done.


  • Kari gold member
    January 15

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    I love the fantasy feel of this poem. The imagery in it is very vivid. I hate coming out of the fantasy world sometimes because reality can bite. Excellent take on the prompt!