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True Love of Sky and Sun

Clouds swoop in and steal the Sun
Sky weeps in sorrowful mourn
But Sun breaks free, rejoining Sky
Dries tears and Rainbow’s born

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Sometimes you just need a love poem to clear up a cloudy day ^^

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  • Kari gold member
    January 2

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    I could almost hear the swooping going on with the clouds and picture everything. It is beautiful with stunning imagery. Thank you for entering and congrats on your hw.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    January 2
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    beautifully penned

  • WiltedRose0777
    January 2
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    Awww, cute.