As I was sitting on the shore
I saw a most beautiful site
On this wonderful fresh water lake
A Lady was swimming at night
The beautiful horse that was there
Was as friendly as could be, to me
I asked if I could sit upon his back
He shook his head and snorted you see
So I got upon his back, I fit just like a glove
He pranced around the shore line so neat
I stroke His mane with my bare hands
The scratching he enjoyed, noded for a repeat
The horse carried me out to the Lady
We all three danced around on the water
What a wonderful time I had in my dream
I was awakened by the sounds of an Otter
A contest entry
- Picture Contest (fantasy) by Faded Existence.
1000 points, ended January 25, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is so cute
so enjoyable to read and picture...mac
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Thanks mac, glad you like this poem. Did you have a nice New Year's day?
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Well your imagination sure did do you justice.. I really liked the story. The rhyming seemed a bit forced I might add... remember it doesn't always have to rhyme! But either way, it was a wonderful story. Very sweet, and beautiful! "I fit just like a glove" Love that! Thank you so much for your entry and good luck!
-Faded
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this poem is pretty (:
and imaginative!
congrats on such a pleasent poem (:
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Thank you missygreendaychimp. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
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no problem (:
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