The moments I am without you, my love,
I'm in pain,
In agony;
I'm not what I once was,
I'm never satisfied,
Never happy.
Why did you have to go?
And leave me here to suffer,
While your're in the heavens above...
Leaving me here,
Leaving your true and only love.
You once were victorious,
The battles, you won them all
You conquered the sea;
However one frightful night,
The sea overtook you,
And it left me.
I'm here tonight to be with you,
The sea shall take me under;
The sea will plunder me;
For without you,
I will live no longer.
The moon;
Like an owl,
Watches my every move,
Knowing I'll be there;
Knowing I'll be with you soon.
I walk towards the incoming tide,
I may leave,
However I won't die;
For death is of mourning,
And there shall be no mourning when I'm by your side.
A contest entry
- Picture Contest (fantasy) by Faded Existence.
1000 points, ended January 25, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - hurt by solitarytear.
400 points, ended January 18, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gold rhymed poems only. by ecrivain01.
550 points, ended February 11, 43 entries
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Comments
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lovely poem my dear, truly. but its not what I am looking for in the rhyming sceme. thank you tho for entering. if you wish to re-enter another one please do so.
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oops, im sorry
but thanks. :]
much love,
Chasity♥
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Oh my goodness, this gave me chills down my spine (and my right leg oddly lol) This was such a beautiful story. While reading it, I felt so depressed. It so depressing until this last stanza. It was such a beautiful story.
"However I won't die;
For death is of mourning,
And there shall be no mourning when I'm by your side."
This was, ah I can't even put it into words how beautiful those three lines alone were!
I loved how it was like she's dead already with him gone, so death is like breathing life back into her because she will be with him again. So amazing! So beautiful!
The emotions and beauty absolutely consumed me while I read this amazing tale. You sure did put a wonderful caption to this picture. Your imagination brought such a masterpeice thank you so much for entrying my contest and best of luck!
-Faded
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awe thank you so much. :]]
i tried. :]]
much love,
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Well you most definitely succeeded... you did more than succeed!!
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awe, :]]
does this mean im a finalist,...maybe?? -hehe-
much love,
Chasity♥
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