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The real love

All that it ever took was....
One kiss...
One glance...
One smile....
One hug...
A simple hello...

I knew from the start that i truely loved you.
It's not like any other love....
It's something magical..
Something that can't be broken or tainted...

We both had no trust for the opposite sex...
Yet we trusted each other like no other...
Everytime we touch everything explodes into color..
There's no grey or even black and white...

Without you...what's the point in breathing...
Because without you i have no air...
I know for a fact that i was Unconditionaly and irrevocably in love with you.

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  • oldschoolhero gold member
    November 2
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    smile ;D


  • Deathanddecay
    October 29
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    : )

    love is something that is painful for some till you find that one person that u spend ur life with


    i hope that im urs .......


  • Hate-And-Pain
    March 29

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    Very beautiful piece, flows perfectly and how so much honesty and meaning.
    I loved the last line, reminds me of the line from the Twilight novel.
    Well done.

  • wow i love this sunshine its beutiful


  • quaneefah
    January 2

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    Lovely

    Awe it is so nice to have these thoughts of love in the beginning when your young love comes with responsibility also never forget that and don't get caught out there in any traps with a man it is very hard to decipher when your young we trust we love and we get hurt enjoy the experience but stay safe thank you for sharing this is a lovely write I enjoyed reading it. keep your head up peace and blessing. Happy New Year.

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