wood pile
by the door
karate test
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A contest entry
- Contemporary Haiku by Harrisham Minhas.
525 points, ended January 21, 25 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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congratulations on the gold
how did I ever miss this one
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Hey, congrats on the gold! don't hurt your fist on the wood pile though!
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I love this...It definitely has that 'AHA' moment in the last line. Good luck...this is worthy of gold in my opinion...Bravo!
Mariana
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Thanks for your Haiku:
"wood pile
by the door
karate test"
This is a delightful write. It expresses much in brevity. And it has an AHA moment in the last line, as required in a good Haiku.
Thanks again.
Harrisham Minhas
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LOL...This one's cool! A short haiku but one that says so much. I had a laugh reading it. Excellent aha moment. I'm enjoying reading this forwards and backwards.
Happy 2009!
Charishma
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cute one. I can envision this.
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hahahaha, a delight to read.
no axe to split the wood, eh?
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Love the imagery in this one, I can visualize the moment very clearly. It also has a ring of comedy.
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