Here kitty, kitty, kitty
Face and body so pretty
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With thighs so thin
Begging me to come in
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One touch of your fur
I hear your soft purr
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As I open your door
Your purr turns to roar
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As I kiss those lips
You thrust your hips
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I taste you oh so slow
We have so far to go
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You touch my face
This is not a race
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I take my time
For love so sublime
♥
My tongue disappears
Releasing moans and tears
♥
Did I cross the line
Loving my sweet feline
Author notes
By ~ Maxboy
Background By ~ JeanieD Hunter
Picture Prompt ~ Unknown ~ 10 to 20 Lines
HM
In a list
A contest entry
- all the prewrites you want (theres a catch) by serenity silvermoon.
400 points, ended January 7, 299 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
~PLEASE COMMENT~
Comments
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Wow, so so clever.
I love the images you protrayed, and oh this was just amazing
Favorite lines
"As I open your door
Your purr turns to roar"
Amazing
~Serenity
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Thank you for your great comment, I am happy you enjoyed my write.
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This is very hott and kinky.
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Thank you very much for your comment, I am glad you liked my write.
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You clearly got well into this one!
Nicely done!
Jeff
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Thank you for the comment.
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aw a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa
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Thank you so much for your beautiful comments, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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LOL I wondered if anyone would post for this prompt. You did a great job. It's a perfect fit. Thanks for following my rule as well as taking time to enter.
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you liked my write.
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Oh I love this poem and you know why, for your words are wonderful and so sublime. This is wonderful.
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Thank you for your wonderful comment sweetie, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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This is quite the piece! Very hot under the covers! Superbly penned, the rhyme doesn't miss a beat. Good luck in your contests hunni
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Thank you for your wonderful comment sweetie, I am pleased you liked my write.
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this was great and very sexy i felt as if i was in this poem keep that pen flowing and i will keep on reading my favorite part was where his hips thurst and i did not have a least favorite part i couldnt stop reading
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Thank you very much for the Honorable Mention, I am very happy you enjoyed my write so much.
Thanks Again
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Hee Hee!!! I love this hon very well done here
Good luck to you hon!
My tongue disappears
Releasing moans and tears
Did I cross the line
Loving my sweet feline
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Thank you very much sweet candy girl, I am pleased you enjoyed my little ditty.
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looking at ou with big eyes here wow. um you that is.
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Thank you Rheea for the comment, I think, hope you liked it.
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OMG. This is so hot. Get's a girl thinking.
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One moment please......I have to gather myself.
Ok now I can comment.
This is a very sensual write. I love the flow and the rhyming. Background is also very nice.
Laura
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Thank you sweetie for your wonderful comment, I am pleased it was good for you.
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