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A Hopeful Thaw

Winter’s icy grasp
Slowly loosens with spring’s thaw.
Maybe hearts will too...

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Chaoticfrolic

This poem holds much more meaning than just what you see... unfortunately

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    January 17

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    Thanks for your Haiku:

    "Winter’s icy grasp
    Slowly loosens with spring’s thaw.
    Maybe hearts will too..."


    An interesting comparison has been drawn here.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • Olivias Violin
    January 6
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    VERY GOOD!!

    Wishing you all the best


  • hollowriver
    January 5
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    simplistic message
    oh how truthfull

  • Beautiful

    More than words are written here I see.


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 3
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    love the message behind it. terrific.

    ♥ Kathraina

  • WiltedRose0777
    January 2
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    well, spring is the time when fools fall in love, they say! Nice haiku.

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